學會欣賞他人
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on learning to appreciate others by commenting on the remark, 「When you choose to see the good in others, you end up finding the good in yourself .」 You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導語解讀：要求考生從評論題目中的「當你選擇去發現他人好的一面，你就會發現自己美好的一面」出發，就「學會欣賞他人」這一話題展開論述。
2. 文章立意：如果你欣賞他人，他人才會欣賞你。因此，欣賞他人很重要，我們要學會欣賞他人。
寫作思路
1. 第一段簡要評論題目中給定的話語的含義，然後提出論點：我們應該學會欣賞他人。
2. 第二段通過排比論證的方式闡述學會欣賞他人的重要性：既有利於自身，又有利於他人和社會。
3. 第三段點明應如何欣賞他人。
參考範文
「When you choose to see the good in others, you end up finding the good in yourself.」 The remark tells us that if you appreciate others you』ll be appreciated by others. Therefore, we should learn to appreciate others. 1
It is a happy thing to appreciate others and be appreciated in return. Learning to appreciate others can make you become open-minded; learning to appreciate others can make you popular among people around you; learning to appreciate others can make yourself be appreciated by others; learning to appreciate others can make your heart full of love; learning to appreciate others can make you become benevolent; learning to appreciate others can help you become wise. Besides, learning to appreciate others is helpful to establish a healthy and harmonious interpersonal relationship and a bright and beautiful world. 2
How to appreciate others? App-reciating others means accepting, tolerating, praising, respecting and loving others. Take a boy of my classmates as an example. He often gets first place, but he is too arrogant and therefore he is not popular in our class. Although he’s very smart, he is not accepted by others because he can』t appreciate others. Let’s get along with each other with a kind and sincere heart and appreciate each other. 3
「當你選擇去發現他人好的一面，你就會發現自己美好的一面。」這句話告訴我們如果你欣賞他人，他人也會欣賞你。因此，我們應該學著去欣賞他人。
欣賞他人而他人也欣賞你是一件快樂的事情。學會欣賞他人可以使你更加開明；學會欣賞他人可以使你在朋友中受到歡迎；學會欣賞他人可以使他人也欣賞你；學會欣賞他人可以使你充滿愛心；學會欣賞他人可以使你變得仁慈；學會欣賞他人可以使你變得睿智。此外，學會欣賞他人有助於建立起健康和諧的人際關係和歡快美好的世界。
如何欣賞他人呢？欣賞他人意味著接受、容忍、讚美、尊重、愛他人。比如我們班的一個男生，他經常是班中的第一名，但是他太高傲自大，因此在班裡不受歡迎。儘管他很聰明，但因為不會欣賞他人而不被他人接受。讓我們用真誠的心與人相處並相互欣賞。
範文點評
1. 開篇簡要評述給定話語的含義，引出文章的觀點：學會欣賞他人。
2. 第二段採用排比論證的方式論述學會欣賞他人的好處，緊扣作文話題。
3. 第三段運用例證的方式論證如何欣賞他人，進一步升華觀點。
要點用法
end up doing sth. 以做某事而告終
open-minded adj. 思想開明的
benevolent adj. 仁慈的；慈善的
harmonious adj. 和諧的；和睦的
get along with 與……相處
句法點評
1. It is a happy thing to appreciate others and be appreciated in return.
It代替真正的主語，即動詞不定式to appreciate others and be appreciated，充當形式主語。in return意為「反過來，反而」。
2. Take a boy of my classmates as an example.
take...as an example是「舉例」的表達方式，又可以說成take...for example或者直接表示為take sth./sb.意為「以某人/某事為例」。
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