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Yu Garden
豫園
If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to Yu Garden.
如果我的一個外國朋友參觀我的家鄉,上海,我想帶她去豫園。
Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God Temple in the northeast of Shanghai. Here she will marvel at the exotic and exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden. She can walk on the crooked bridge and take photos of the beautiful goldfish. Besides, she can taste the local cuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk. There are a variety of mouth-watering snacks there. Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different craftsmen. For example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.
豫園是一個傳統的中式花園坐落在上海的城隍廟在東北。她會驚嘆中國人的異國情調和精緻的美麗花園。她能走在彎曲的橋樑和拍攝美麗的金魚。此外,她可以品嘗當地的美食像饅頭,餛飩麵條,豆漿。有各種各樣的美味小吃。除了美麗的風景和美味的食物,她也會顯著的性能不同的工匠所吸引。例如,她會看到海派剪紙,中國糖果和粘土雕像的過程。
I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden. This is a place where the features of this city are combined.
我相信我的朋友會有美好的一天,如果她訪問豫園。這是這個城市的特點結合的地方。
【點評】
本次四級作文一反以往的圖片題形式，改為情境式話題作文，可能讓準備好圖片題寫作的同學有點措手不及。不過話題貼近生活，要求介紹自己家鄉的某景點，寫起來相對簡單。此類文章在結構上的要求不像議論文那樣嚴格，所以可以在語言文字上博出彩，增加詞彙的豐富性、句子的流暢性都是不錯的加分點。
Yu Garden
豫園
If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to Yu Garden.
如果我的一個外國朋友參觀我的家鄉,上海,我想帶她去豫園。
Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God Temple in the northeast of Shanghai. Here she will marvel at the exotic and exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden. She can walk on the crooked bridge and take photos of the beautiful goldfish. Besides, she can taste the local cuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk. There are a variety of mouth-watering snacks there. Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different craftsmen. For example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.
豫園是一個傳統的中式花園坐落在上海的城隍廟在東北。她會驚嘆中國人的異國情調和精緻的美麗花園。她能走在彎曲的橋樑和拍攝美麗的金魚。此外,她可以品嘗當地的美食像饅頭,餛飩麵條,豆漿。有各種各樣的美味小吃。除了美麗的風景和美味的食物,她也會顯著的性能不同的工匠所吸引。例如,她會看到海派剪紙,中國糖果和粘土雕像的過程。
I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden. This is a place where the features of this city are combined.
我相信我的朋友會有美好的一天,如果她訪問豫園。這是這個城市的特點結合的地方。
【點評】
本次四級作文一反以往的圖片題形式，改為情境式話題作文，可能讓準備好圖片題寫作的同學有點措手不及。不過話題貼近生活，要求介紹自己家鄉的某景點，寫起來相對簡單。此類文章在結構上的要求不像議論文那樣嚴格，所以可以在語言文字上博出彩，增加詞彙的豐富性、句子的流暢性都是不錯的加分點。
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