2015年10月10日雅思大作文範文
Some people think to prevent illness and disease, government should focus
more on environmental pollution and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
【Introduction】
There is no doubt that environmental pollution and terrible housing
conditions contribute to poor health and lead to greater instances of sickness.
Nevertheless, government has an essential role to play in the eradication of
disease and ought to focus on improving the lives of their citizens.
【Body】
With regards to keeping the atmosphere clean, officials ought to decrease
the number of vehicles on the roads to reduce environmental pollution caused by
the discharge of contaminants. In terms of an industrial setting, authorities
must place reasonable restrictions on factory output in order to cleanse the air
and decrease atmospheric contamination. In the event that corporations fail to
adhere to these established regulations, they should be heavily penalized to
discourage this behaviour.
Housing plays a significant role in the well-being of citizens as they
spend most of their time in their living spaces. The addition of simple
facilities could increase the quality of housing including air conditioners and
heaters to regulate temperature to prevent catching a cold or sinks and showers
to wash away dirt. The materials used in the construction process may cause
asbestos poisoning or deteriorating conditions are associated with exposure to
lead, mold, dust mites and rodents. Furthermore, the prices of accommodation,
especially in large cities is extraordinarily costly, forcing employees to work
overtime and extra hours in order to afford housing.
【Conclusion】
Placing an emphasis on fixing these environmental and housing issues will
have a positive effect on members of society. It will lead to preventing the
spread of disease and slowly develop a higher standard of living for citizens,
which ought to be the goal of any government entity.
Some people think to prevent illness and disease, government should focus
more on environmental pollution and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
【Introduction】
There is no doubt that environmental pollution and terrible housing
conditions contribute to poor health and lead to greater instances of sickness.
Nevertheless, government has an essential role to play in the eradication of
disease and ought to focus on improving the lives of their citizens.
【Body】
With regards to keeping the atmosphere clean, officials ought to decrease
the number of vehicles on the roads to reduce environmental pollution caused by
the discharge of contaminants. In terms of an industrial setting, authorities
must place reasonable restrictions on factory output in order to cleanse the air
and decrease atmospheric contamination. In the event that corporations fail to
adhere to these established regulations, they should be heavily penalized to
discourage this behaviour.
Housing plays a significant role in the well-being of citizens as they
spend most of their time in their living spaces. The addition of simple
facilities could increase the quality of housing including air conditioners and
heaters to regulate temperature to prevent catching a cold or sinks and showers
to wash away dirt. The materials used in the construction process may cause
asbestos poisoning or deteriorating conditions are associated with exposure to
lead, mold, dust mites and rodents. Furthermore, the prices of accommodation,
especially in large cities is extraordinarily costly, forcing employees to work
overtime and extra hours in order to afford housing.
【Conclusion】
Placing an emphasis on fixing these environmental and housing issues will
have a positive effect on members of society. It will lead to preventing the
spread of disease and slowly develop a higher standard of living for citizens,
which ought to be the goal of any government entity.
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