but now I live in Beijing when she lives in 1. _____
Guangzhou. We dont look each other very often, 2. _____
but were keep in touch all the time. I often write 3. _____
to Mary and telling her about the things that4. _____
are happened at my company, and she often 5. _____
writes to me about her work. We talk on phone6. _____
once a week. Sometime I call her on her 7. _____
car phone, or we send e-mail to each other. 8. ____
Were really luck. There are so many ways 9. ____
we can keep in touch with each other. 10. ____
【答案解析】
1. all改為both。指Mary和作者兩個人。
2. when改為and或while。因為兩個分句沒有主從關係。而是並列關係,或者有對比或對照的含義。
3. look改為see。因為此句意為兩個人不能經常見面。
4. 去掉keep或把were改為we。因為keep是動詞,若不是進行時態或被動語態,動詞前不用be,但句中沒有動詞時必用be。所以去掉keep或去掉are,
5. telling改為tell。tell和write是並列謂語。
6. happened改為happening。因為這是現在進行時態。
7. phone前加the。因為on the phone是習語,意為用電話。
8. Sometime改為Sometimes。此處表示有時候,而不是表示某個不定的時候。
9. 此行正確。
10. luck改為lucky。用形容詞作表語。
9. 去掉to。had better後接動詞原形。
10. quick前加a。make a decision意為作出決定。
Guangzhou. We dont look each other very often, 2. _____
but were keep in touch all the time. I often write 3. _____
to Mary and telling her about the things that4. _____
are happened at my company, and she often 5. _____
writes to me about her work. We talk on phone6. _____
once a week. Sometime I call her on her 7. _____
car phone, or we send e-mail to each other. 8. ____
Were really luck. There are so many ways 9. ____
we can keep in touch with each other. 10. ____
【答案解析】
1. all改為both。指Mary和作者兩個人。
2. when改為and或while。因為兩個分句沒有主從關係。而是並列關係,或者有對比或對照的含義。
3. look改為see。因為此句意為兩個人不能經常見面。
4. 去掉keep或把were改為we。因為keep是動詞,若不是進行時態或被動語態,動詞前不用be,但句中沒有動詞時必用be。所以去掉keep或去掉are,
5. telling改為tell。tell和write是並列謂語。
6. happened改為happening。因為這是現在進行時態。
7. phone前加the。因為on the phone是習語,意為用電話。
8. Sometime改為Sometimes。此處表示有時候,而不是表示某個不定的時候。
9. 此行正確。
10. luck改為lucky。用形容詞作表語。
9. 去掉to。had better後接動詞原形。
10. quick前加a。make a decision意為作出決定。
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