I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint.
Yesterday I bought an electric fan in your shop, but when I got home and turned it on, it didnt work. So I took it back and talked to the assistant about the problem. To my surprise, instead of helping me solve the problem, the man, in a rude manner, refused to examine it.
Generally, your shop is well-known for good service and that is why I bought the electric fan in your shop. I was really upset to find that such a thing should have occurred in your shop.
I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
New Years Day is one of important days for many people in the world during the year. Most people spend the New Years Day in hotels. January 1st is considered as the New Years Day. Most companies, shops, school, and government offices are closed during that time. People prepare for New Years Day from late December.
First, people spend a few days to clean their houses completely. Some families then put up some new painting from November to be sent in January. The New Years meal is also prepared from the end of December. During the New Years Day, people usually do not cook and relax at home. On New Years Eve, it is common to have a bag dinner with family members or friends at home or in hotels and hear bells which informs us of the coming New Year. On New Years Day, people greet each other.
Some people wear new coats and visit temples to pray for happiness and health through out the New Year. Children are busy with getting the gifts from their parents and relatives.
My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is richin fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
上個月在巴黎，一家法國公司拍賣兩個銅像----老鼠的`頭部和一個兔子頭捕捉到中國，這在中國引起很大的關注。
由於眾所周知，這兩個青銅獸首均是在清代裝飾圓明園。 1860年，英法聯軍闖入北京，燒毀了皇家園林，帶走了中國的藝術作品以百萬計，其中包括兩個頭的遺蹟。
我國政府強烈反對這次拍賣，並一再為他們自由返回要求按照國際法律。同時，我國人民已採取行動，太。有些人甚至飛到了法國，試圖阻止銷售。然而，法國的公司就是不聽。
我認為，拍賣應該受到強烈譴責。它不僅傷害人民的感情，但也帶來了恥辱，法國。作為中學生，我們必須努力學習，使我們能夠再次發生在我們的祖國更強大的未來和制止任何這樣的事情。
Dear World Child Foundation organizers，
My name is Jerry Lu, a student currently studying at Shanghai High school. I am writing, on behalf of my classmates, to apply for the2000yuan's worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.
Being raised in families that don』t have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate peers. On this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-reliefendeavor. The following is how we would go about using the money. We would spend1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students in a poverty-stricken area. It is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up the school supplies themselves instead of us 「doling out」 the supplies so that we wouldn』tendup embarrassing those who we want to help. The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions.
At theendof the day, our efforts might only trigger a ripple in the lives of some young people, but who knows what butterfly effects these young minds may have on tomorrow's world?
We would be much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours Sincerely,
Jerry Lu
一、題型特點
改寫： 通常情況下，改寫類的寫作命題可要求考生將一篇對話、留言、信件、電話記錄或其他類型的語言材料改寫成一篇短文。也有的試題要求考生能夠根據所給的提示（漢語或英語）寫一篇對話。這類試題大多要求考生將試題所提供的語言材料的主要內容，以記敘文的形式表達出來。試題可以規定考生以第幾人稱的形式來敘述這件事情，並且規定了一定的詞數。
縮寫： 這類命題通常要求學生將一篇較長的文章，縮寫成一篇短文。這類命題通常要求學生把握原文中的主要內容，並且用自己的語言將其敘述出來。這類試題一般都會規定詞數的範圍。
續寫： 這類試題通常給出了一件事情或一個故事的開頭，要求考生根據自己的想像，將這件事情或故事寫完整，使其結構完整，情節的發展自然合理。
擴寫： 擴寫實際上是改寫的一個方面。這類命題要求考生能夠依據所給定的較為簡短的語言材料，擴寫成為一篇符合字數要求的文章。這類試題一般來講也對文章的字數或其它的方面作出了要求。
回信： 這類試題所提供的材料通常是英語信件的形式，要求考生能夠根據所給信件的內容及回信中必須包含的要點寫一封回信。
二、 寫作 技巧
1、 認真審題，把握要求。 在審題的過程中，應注意把握試題所提供的條件、要求（通常以文字的形式出現）、體裁、詞數、人稱形式等。
2、 細讀材料，把握中心。 一般說來，所給出的試題材料都是圍繞一個中心展開的。它講述的通常是一個小故事或小事件。這個小故事或小事件就是這我們所要表述的中心。
3、 初步構思，考慮用詞。 在把所握文章的中心後，形成一個基本的框架，再考慮使用恰當的詞語，包括恰當的短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內容。在用詞方面，應儘可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型，還應注意適當使用高級詞彙、複雜的結構等，這在近年的高考閱卷過程中反覆強調了這一點。
4、 聯詞成句，組段成文。 運用適當的單詞或短語正確表達文章中各個要點。然後使用正確的過渡詞將單個的句子來連接起來。連接時，要注意使用適當的連接詞語或過渡性語句，以使語句間的聯繫更為緊密，過渡更加自然。
Dear Jane,
Glad to hear from you and you』re welcome to China in July. The following are some Chinese customs.
Firstly, we greet each other by saying 「Hello」 or asking such questions as 「Where are you going?」 or 「Are you busy?」 to express our care. Secondly, when praised, we reply with 「Oh, no!」 or 「I』m over-praised」 to show good manners. Next, when receiving a gift, we usually say 「It’s unnecessary」 besides 「Thanks」 to show politeness and then put it away. Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone’s health or success to show that we』re warm.
Anyhow, different cultures, different customs. If you 「Do as the Romans do when in Rome」， you』ll enjoy more of your stay here.
I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Peter,
I』m very glad to know that you have interest in Chinese novels. There are so many famous novels written in Chinese, including classical novels and modern novels, among which I like A Dream of Red Mansions most. It is an interesting novel and is excellent beyond comparison. Based on Jia and Lin’s love story, it describes a tragedy about love and the decline about a big family,which exposes the social crisis.
The book is written in old Chinese, which is difficult to understand. So when you read it, you』d better get a Chinese dictionary ready for reference. In addition, I suggest that you should know some background knowledge about Qing Dynasty.
I wish you would have fun and learn something through reading it.
Yours,
Li Hua
全國新課標II卷高考英語作文的題目為：假定你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院陪老人們過重陽節，請給外教露西寫封郵件，邀請她一同前往，內容包括：
1、出發及返回時間
2、活動：包餃子、表演節目等
【參考範文】
Dear Lucy,
How are you doing? I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school. Recently, our class plan to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the old there and enrich our afterschool life. As the vice monitor, I would like to invite you to come with us.
Here are some details about this activity. To begin with, we will leave the school by bus at 8:00 AM and return at 5:00 PM. Besides, there will be a lot of activities such as making Chinese dumplings and giving performances, which will be not only meaningful but also interesting.
Hopefully, you would like the plan and join us. I have the confidence that we will have a great time there. Thanks for reading my letter. I am looking forward to your reply and your decision.
Best wishes,
There are many people who think that wealth is better than health.I used to think so until one day I read a story about Howard Hughes.He was an American billionaire who got anything he wanted.However,in the last twenty years of his life,his health began to deteriorate and he was miserable.He had the best doctors and nurses.However,he could still find no relief.I realized that health is worth all the money in the world.If you have millions of dollars but your health is poor,you will not be able to do what you want to do.I would like to say dont hurt yourself trying to make money.Instead take care of your body and be happy with what you do have.Health is more important.
So I think health is more important than wealth.People can do nothing if they are always in poor health,let alone matter we are rich or not,we can not ignore the importance of health.
很多人都認為財富比健康更重要。在讀到Howard Hughes的故事之前，我也是這麼認為的。Howard Hughes是美國的一個億萬富翁，能得到他想得到的任何東西。但是在他生命的最後二十年，他的身體變得很糟糕，他很悲慘。他有最好的醫生和護士，但仍得不到解脫。我意識到在這個世界上，健康的身體抵得上所有的金錢。因為即使你有百萬美元但身體不健康，也不能做你想做的事情。我想說的是關心你的身體，對你所擁有的一切感到高興，不要為掙錢損害你的身體。健康更重要。
所以，我認為健康比財富更重要。如果一個人身體總是不好，他什麼也做不成，更不用談幸福了。不管我們貧窮還是富有，都不能忽視健康的重要性。
Yesterday I bought an electric fan in your shop, but when I got home and turned it on, it didnt work. So I took it back and talked to the assistant about the problem. To my surprise, instead of helping me solve the problem, the man, in a rude manner, refused to examine it.
Generally, your shop is well-known for good service and that is why I bought the electric fan in your shop. I was really upset to find that such a thing should have occurred in your shop.
I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
高考英語作文 篇二
New Years Day is one of important days for many people in the world during the year. Most people spend the New Years Day in hotels. January 1st is considered as the New Years Day. Most companies, shops, school, and government offices are closed during that time. People prepare for New Years Day from late December.
First, people spend a few days to clean their houses completely. Some families then put up some new painting from November to be sent in January. The New Years meal is also prepared from the end of December. During the New Years Day, people usually do not cook and relax at home. On New Years Eve, it is common to have a bag dinner with family members or friends at home or in hotels and hear bells which informs us of the coming New Year. On New Years Day, people greet each other.
Some people wear new coats and visit temples to pray for happiness and health through out the New Year. Children are busy with getting the gifts from their parents and relatives.
高考英語作文 篇三
My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is richin fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
高考英語作文 篇四
上個月在巴黎，一家法國公司拍賣兩個銅像----老鼠的`頭部和一個兔子頭捕捉到中國，這在中國引起很大的關注。
由於眾所周知，這兩個青銅獸首均是在清代裝飾圓明園。 1860年，英法聯軍闖入北京，燒毀了皇家園林，帶走了中國的藝術作品以百萬計，其中包括兩個頭的遺蹟。
我國政府強烈反對這次拍賣，並一再為他們自由返回要求按照國際法律。同時，我國人民已採取行動，太。有些人甚至飛到了法國，試圖阻止銷售。然而，法國的公司就是不聽。
我認為，拍賣應該受到強烈譴責。它不僅傷害人民的感情，但也帶來了恥辱，法國。作為中學生，我們必須努力學習，使我們能夠再次發生在我們的祖國更強大的未來和制止任何這樣的事情。
高考英語作文 篇五
Dear World Child Foundation organizers，
My name is Jerry Lu, a student currently studying at Shanghai High school. I am writing, on behalf of my classmates, to apply for the2000yuan's worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.
Being raised in families that don』t have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate peers. On this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-reliefendeavor. The following is how we would go about using the money. We would spend1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students in a poverty-stricken area. It is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up the school supplies themselves instead of us 「doling out」 the supplies so that we wouldn』tendup embarrassing those who we want to help. The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions.
At theendof the day, our efforts might only trigger a ripple in the lives of some young people, but who knows what butterfly effects these young minds may have on tomorrow's world?
We would be much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours Sincerely,
Jerry Lu
高考英語作文 篇六
一、題型特點
改寫： 通常情況下，改寫類的寫作命題可要求考生將一篇對話、留言、信件、電話記錄或其他類型的語言材料改寫成一篇短文。也有的試題要求考生能夠根據所給的提示（漢語或英語）寫一篇對話。這類試題大多要求考生將試題所提供的語言材料的主要內容，以記敘文的形式表達出來。試題可以規定考生以第幾人稱的形式來敘述這件事情，並且規定了一定的詞數。
縮寫： 這類命題通常要求學生將一篇較長的文章，縮寫成一篇短文。這類命題通常要求學生把握原文中的主要內容，並且用自己的語言將其敘述出來。這類試題一般都會規定詞數的範圍。
續寫： 這類試題通常給出了一件事情或一個故事的開頭，要求考生根據自己的想像，將這件事情或故事寫完整，使其結構完整，情節的發展自然合理。
擴寫： 擴寫實際上是改寫的一個方面。這類命題要求考生能夠依據所給定的較為簡短的語言材料，擴寫成為一篇符合字數要求的文章。這類試題一般來講也對文章的字數或其它的方面作出了要求。
回信： 這類試題所提供的材料通常是英語信件的形式，要求考生能夠根據所給信件的內容及回信中必須包含的要點寫一封回信。
二、 寫作 技巧
1、 認真審題，把握要求。 在審題的過程中，應注意把握試題所提供的條件、要求（通常以文字的形式出現）、體裁、詞數、人稱形式等。
2、 細讀材料，把握中心。 一般說來，所給出的試題材料都是圍繞一個中心展開的。它講述的通常是一個小故事或小事件。這個小故事或小事件就是這我們所要表述的中心。
3、 初步構思，考慮用詞。 在把所握文章的中心後，形成一個基本的框架，再考慮使用恰當的詞語，包括恰當的短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內容。在用詞方面，應儘可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型，還應注意適當使用高級詞彙、複雜的結構等，這在近年的高考閱卷過程中反覆強調了這一點。
4、 聯詞成句，組段成文。 運用適當的單詞或短語正確表達文章中各個要點。然後使用正確的過渡詞將單個的句子來連接起來。連接時，要注意使用適當的連接詞語或過渡性語句，以使語句間的聯繫更為緊密，過渡更加自然。
高考英語作文：一封信英語作文 篇七
Dear Jane,
Glad to hear from you and you』re welcome to China in July. The following are some Chinese customs.
Firstly, we greet each other by saying 「Hello」 or asking such questions as 「Where are you going?」 or 「Are you busy?」 to express our care. Secondly, when praised, we reply with 「Oh, no!」 or 「I』m over-praised」 to show good manners. Next, when receiving a gift, we usually say 「It’s unnecessary」 besides 「Thanks」 to show politeness and then put it away. Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone’s health or success to show that we』re warm.
Anyhow, different cultures, different customs. If you 「Do as the Romans do when in Rome」， you』ll enjoy more of your stay here.
I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
高考英語作文 篇八
Dear Peter,
I』m very glad to know that you have interest in Chinese novels. There are so many famous novels written in Chinese, including classical novels and modern novels, among which I like A Dream of Red Mansions most. It is an interesting novel and is excellent beyond comparison. Based on Jia and Lin’s love story, it describes a tragedy about love and the decline about a big family,which exposes the social crisis.
The book is written in old Chinese, which is difficult to understand. So when you read it, you』d better get a Chinese dictionary ready for reference. In addition, I suggest that you should know some background knowledge about Qing Dynasty.
I wish you would have fun and learn something through reading it.
Yours,
Li Hua
高考英語作文 篇九
全國新課標II卷高考英語作文的題目為：假定你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院陪老人們過重陽節，請給外教露西寫封郵件，邀請她一同前往，內容包括：
1、出發及返回時間
2、活動：包餃子、表演節目等
【參考範文】
Dear Lucy,
How are you doing? I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school. Recently, our class plan to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the old there and enrich our afterschool life. As the vice monitor, I would like to invite you to come with us.
Here are some details about this activity. To begin with, we will leave the school by bus at 8:00 AM and return at 5:00 PM. Besides, there will be a lot of activities such as making Chinese dumplings and giving performances, which will be not only meaningful but also interesting.
Hopefully, you would like the plan and join us. I have the confidence that we will have a great time there. Thanks for reading my letter. I am looking forward to your reply and your decision.
Best wishes,
高考英語作文 篇十
There are many people who think that wealth is better than health.I used to think so until one day I read a story about Howard Hughes.He was an American billionaire who got anything he wanted.However,in the last twenty years of his life,his health began to deteriorate and he was miserable.He had the best doctors and nurses.However,he could still find no relief.I realized that health is worth all the money in the world.If you have millions of dollars but your health is poor,you will not be able to do what you want to do.I would like to say dont hurt yourself trying to make money.Instead take care of your body and be happy with what you do have.Health is more important.
So I think health is more important than wealth.People can do nothing if they are always in poor health,let alone matter we are rich or not,we can not ignore the importance of health.
很多人都認為財富比健康更重要。在讀到Howard Hughes的故事之前，我也是這麼認為的。Howard Hughes是美國的一個億萬富翁，能得到他想得到的任何東西。但是在他生命的最後二十年，他的身體變得很糟糕，他很悲慘。他有最好的醫生和護士，但仍得不到解脫。我意識到在這個世界上，健康的身體抵得上所有的金錢。因為即使你有百萬美元但身體不健康，也不能做你想做的事情。我想說的是關心你的身體，對你所擁有的一切感到高興，不要為掙錢損害你的身體。健康更重要。
所以，我認為健康比財富更重要。如果一個人身體總是不好，他什麼也做不成，更不用談幸福了。不管我們貧窮還是富有，都不能忽視健康的重要性。
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